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I love strawberries. They are yummy and of course, good for me as well. :D



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This has to be one of my favorite photos you've posted so far.

The tilt in the photo gives this an interesting perspective from normal "straight" view. You have the focus in a great spot, and the shine from the sun gives it an almost natural look.

I think what would give this image a more cheerful look is if there was more orange/yellow or just natural bright colors in the background. Perhaps you should edit this a tad in a photo program to bring out the happiness that this photo can create.

You should do more food images for fun. It's always neat to see how you can set different foods in different places. (If that makes any sense.)
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My first thoughts of this photo is that it's very.. appetizing. The way they seem to be tumbling down from a never ending heap is just fantastic! The color of the strawberries really pops against the stark white of the bowl, it makes appreciating the subject matter easier and more enjoyable.

The focus of the strawberries obviously works and the arrangement looks very natural and makes the shot look professionally done. But the background doesn't correspond with this professional subject matter. I would have liked to see it against a completely white background, it exaggerate the colors of the strawberries and make them look even more luscious. But I do understand that this shot may have just been an on the spot photograph that captures your current love for the fruit. That I can also appreciate.

All in all, it's a very beautiful shot.
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Yummy:D

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Indeed. :D

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